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melissajmAnyone want to offer their 2 cents on this?
I'm working on the Demon Project-turning those stories, with their myriad POV, into something book-length. I've just finished a long section from the POV of a girl named Julia. At the end of it she's brought Malak, the half-demon, to the house of his uncle, Seraph Jotham.
The next major section is from Jotham's POV. I want to include a scene between Julia and Jotham, from Julia's POV, that takes place after the events of this next section.
Would it be better to do it at the end of Julia's section, which would mean a bit of a flashback, or at the end of Jotham's, which would make chronological sense, but would mean switching back to Julia's POV just for this section?
I could TRY pulling off the scene from Jotham's POV. Not sure that would work, but it might.
Any thoughts?
I'm working on the Demon Project-turning those stories, with their myriad POV, into something book-length. I've just finished a long section from the POV of a girl named Julia. At the end of it she's brought Malak, the half-demon, to the house of his uncle, Seraph Jotham.
The next major section is from Jotham's POV. I want to include a scene between Julia and Jotham, from Julia's POV, that takes place after the events of this next section.
Would it be better to do it at the end of Julia's section, which would mean a bit of a flashback, or at the end of Jotham's, which would make chronological sense, but would mean switching back to Julia's POV just for this section?
I could TRY pulling off the scene from Jotham's POV. Not sure that would work, but it might.
Any thoughts?
