A glimpse of that pony
Sep. 24th, 2006 10:09 amWoohoo! This just might work!
I wrote a little intro. to go with the demon mess. It sets a tone and prepares the reader for the multiple POV thing. (And if I send the result to DDP, it'll make a great blurb!)
Then I started reading from the top, and bits started falling into place. The new starting point makes Malak more sympathetic, and sets things up for a potentially cool ending.
There might be a little book in here somewhere after all!
I wrote a little intro. to go with the demon mess. It sets a tone and prepares the reader for the multiple POV thing. (And if I send the result to DDP, it'll make a great blurb!)
Then I started reading from the top, and bits started falling into place. The new starting point makes Malak more sympathetic, and sets things up for a potentially cool ending.
There might be a little book in here somewhere after all!