A glimpse of that pony

Woohoo! This just might work!

I wrote a little intro. to go with the demon mess. It sets a tone and prepares the reader for the multiple POV thing. (And if I send the result to DDP, it'll make a great blurb!)

Then I started reading from the top, and bits started falling into place. The new starting point makes Malak more sympathetic, and sets things up for a potentially cool ending.

There might be a little book in here somewhere after all!