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Demonized
My "serpent-demon novel" has been getting a lot of feedback along the lines of "This is well written, but I'm just not warming to the main character." People either seem to love Malak or hate him, and so far all the agents have come down on the "No Love" side.
Wiser heads than mine have suggested 2 possible instant turnoffs:
1. Serpent-demons, including Malak, eat anything that moves, including people.
2. Readers see "seraphim" and "demon" and assume a religious framework that isn't there, which throws them off.
So, does anyone have a strong reaction to either of those issues? Or suggestions? Thanks!
Wiser heads than mine have suggested 2 possible instant turnoffs:
1. Serpent-demons, including Malak, eat anything that moves, including people.
2. Readers see "seraphim" and "demon" and assume a religious framework that isn't there, which throws them off.
So, does anyone have a strong reaction to either of those issues? Or suggestions? Thanks!