Passing time

Two sepaarate comments, from two different people, have come together to make me realize something about my writing. Time transitions are a weak point-AND I use scene breaks as a substitute for an effective transition. This is useful, because it gives me a signal for when I'm copping out on a transition.

As Malak would say, I'm a cheat. I just hope the story's "Bent, not broken." ;)

(And thanks to those 2 people. You probably know who you are. ;))