ext_22947 ([identity profile] aeriedraconia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] melissajm 2006-10-31 01:53 am (UTC)

Just some ideas...

Is it possible to sprinkle in a couple of short POV switches here and there throughout the rest of the book to balance it out?

Or

Can you manage to use this one POV for the whole thing? Can you tell the story through this main POV alone?

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